Monday, October 24, 2005

I m ...

I am unhappy,
bcoz i cant keep everyone happy.

I am quiet,
bcoz i know i am not right.

I am unsatisfied,
bcoz i never expected myself to hide.

I am not ready to stand,
bcoz no one seems to understand.

I feel the shame,
bcoz i am to be blamed.

I am sorry,
bcoz i wrote my own sad story.

I am not crying,
bcoz i am still trying.


-- Akky





5 Comments:

At 1:19 AM , Blogger Pascal said...

good one dude!!

Very true for me too! Last line is the best.

 
At 1:24 AM , Blogger Akky said...

shukhriya....!

 
At 12:37 PM , Blogger rohit said...

Cant comment much, but can say only this "Good One!"

 
At 2:25 PM , Anonymous Sampada said...

I am unhappy,
bcoz i cant keep everyone happy.

- wrong. u can never be unhappy. and keeping others happy-thats ur speciality(baye haath ka khel hai!)



I am quiet,
bcoz i know i am not right.

- wrong. u r always right,right?



I am unsatisfied,
bcoz i never expected myself to hide.

- i guess everything is fine around u. god knows y u r unsatisfied!



I am not ready to stand,
bcoz no one seems to understand.

- u can stand re. ur best friends(suchitra,rohit,melanie,manav,vanessa etc etc) can understand u very well.



I feel the shame,
bcoz i am to be blamed.

- no re dont blame urself for no reasons at all!



I am sorry,
bcoz i wrote my own sad story.

- U & SAD!!!!!!!! CANT DIGEST THIS!



I am not crying,
bcoz i am still trying.

- right. crying and all doesnt suit u. and again god knows wot r u TRYING!

 
At 5:21 PM , Blogger Akky said...

LoL... good one !!!

its called dissection and its one of the foolish reasons i dint join HSC Science.

bt now i njoy it i guess!

 

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