Introspection...
Before the last minute passes by of the day
I have few things to say
It’s about me
I feel it’s about things I can clearly see
Today for many it was just another day
I know for me it was a special day
Thinking about things that I happened to do
I give each a thought and spare a second or two
With lots of rights and wrongs on the list
I just lie there and quietly assist
Seldom satisfied with the effort I make
I somewhere know the importance of the small steps I take
Judging the distance from my goal
I make sure I don’t miss the whole
So many things that can go wrong
I know it’s bound to happen when the path is long
With hope for things to happen right
I have my eyes set on a distant sight
Again there are things which I happen to completely ignore
I promise myself that tomorrow I will explore
By now the mind wanders like a kid in the park
I go deeper and deeper by each breath in the dark
Dreams are things that don’t easily come to me
I am the one who likes to imagine and see
Later when I open my eyes
I realize outside I have the blue skies
It’s now when I spare a thought and say
I hope I walk the talk today
--Akky
[need i say... comments awaited!!! ;-)]
11 Comments:
akki didnt know u could write poems
i must say its a commendable effort
at night u become creative
really liked it ...
keep writing more
Melanie
a budding shakespeare, eh?
you ought to publish that in some college rag!
@Melanie: i get creative sitting at home.. ;-) :p
@anonymous: :p... r u sure ?
:p:p:p:p
:p
What is it with guys getting either geeky or brimming with hearts full of poems, that too originals?!
You re the fifth (geek) guy I ve seen turning to poetry.
God! Save us!
Ahem. Btw, nice one that. :P
fifth ...? geek :p
who are the four...?
i guess i knw a couple of them ...(pascal..nitin...rt?)
Heh. yeah.
The other two are people you dont know.
Muahahahahahah.
I would want a reviewers copy then. :P
@rohit: nice idea dude.. :p BTW it wud be SoOoPerMaN :p
@Barkha: yup sure... reviewers copy + invitation at its release + a spl edition autographed copy...!
yup,i'll like a copy of those poems too....!
-Suchitra
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